Thursday, April 21, 2011

Go The Distance

Generations of people should really review
Often they just bid their lives adieu

Take heed, it's time for us all to get a clue
Help may not always be in our life's queue
Each of us has bad habits that we must subdue

Decide what path is best for you
Indulge in free time often too
Stay on course no matter what you do
Today is a new day, believe it's true
And another day will make its debut
Never give up always forge through
Cause if you don't you'll just be blue
Everything happens for a reason don't misconstrue

10 Unleashed voices:

Annette said...

Thanks for dropping by my blog and commenting. Your post looks like a lot of work! I don't think I could come up with all of that -- well done!

barbara said...

poetry of this type is challenging. Well done!

Rebekah Fonseca said...

Great Message in such a lovely poem.

Tara R. said...

Very cool. A wonderfully creative take on this week's theme.

Teresa said...

Good job...a creative take on the prompt...and a challenging form.

Judy said...

Great use of this prompt -- lots of good food for thought here.

Debra Ann Elliott said...

As always, great writing.

Karin said...

Wow! What a great, creative way to fulfill the challenge. Very inspiring!

FGHart said...

That's a fun entry and a nice change of pace. Good job with your 100 words!

Velvet Verbosity said...

Important reminder, and creative angle. :)

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